Happy Dance

spinning
   swirling
      dancing
         prancing
            stomping feet
               and tapping toes

singing
   songing
      humming
         thrumming
            wiggling hips
               and whirling arms

my feet won’t rest
   songs keep bursting out
my smile is stuck on firmly
   with super superglue

I haven’t been drinking
Mountain Dew
   (not this time)

it’s all because
   of you

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7 thoughts on “Happy Dance

  1. This is a brilliant bit of fun!! 😀 And I like the way you’ve laid it out, gives the poem a sense of movement to it which goes with the theme of dancing.

    I did a poem a bit like this a couple of months ago leading up to Halloween on a writers site called Jottify http://jottify.com/works/the-best-of-all/ it isn’t my usual style, but it was great fun to do! I hope you don’t mind the link, don’t usually leave a link in a message, but seeing as you are such a good writer of poetry I thought you might like to know about Jottify. I could be telling you something you already know about of course, but if you don’t you might want to check it out. It’s a very friendly site and is a good way to draw some new attention to your blog!
    Suzy 😀

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    1. Thank you Suzy 🙂 You’ve set Bruce and I off investigating Jottify tonight – we’d never heard of it before, and it seems really interesting – so thanks for that as well 😀

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      1. You are very welcome! 🙂 I just stumbled across it a few months ago through an article I read giving it a brief mention and a link. I’m glad I discovered it before I set up a blog because it helped me get into the a blog mindset, it’s a bit like having your own mini blog in a village of other bloggers! Hope you find it good fun! 😀

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